jueves, 3 de julio de 2008

The Black Cat (Caro M.)

... When the police saw the dead woman and a cat on her head , they took the man and put him the handcuffs. They went to the prisson and the man declared all the story. In the prison the man had got seven cats and he loved them. But the man was going to be killed because he killed his wife and pluto. The next day he went to the gallows, but before that he wrote all the story in a book.
The minutes after he went to the gallows, policemen hang and killed the man.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Good! Just correct: "...a cat on her head..." "...prison... the man told them the ..." " In prison..." "...was going to be killed...Pluto." "...before that..." "...after he went...gallows..."