jueves, 3 de julio de 2008

the black cat


...The policeman entered the house and questioned the narrator. The policeman looked around the house. When the policeman was pulling down the wall the narrator killed the policeman and hid him behind the wall too. He was very bad about this because he thought "I killed many people" and he took him went out and told everythin to a one friend. He told him about that moment and he was very bad and killed him.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Good! Just correct: "...and questioned..." "..looked around..." "...was pulling down the wall...hid him" "...went out and told eveything to a..."