domingo, 6 de julio de 2008

The cat black (Stephie)

When the police were looking at new wall, the narrator went to the top of the house and he closed the door. The policeman wanted to call other people because they wanted help, but they didn´t call anyone because the owner closed all the doors. They didn´t have any luck.
When the police were shouting, he was thinking but he didnt want to live because he didn´t have luck, he was crying, and he didn´t understand because he did everything he did. He wanted to die.
Then he took an axe and cut himself.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Good! Just correct: "When... looking at... the top ..." "The ... call other people... anyone..." "They ..." "When... didn't...crying ..." He ..." "Then..." (Capital Letters!!)