It's a blockbuster!: A detective (por Pamela , Carolina , Michelle y Stephie )

jueves, 19 de junio de 2008

One day Tom was sleeping in the

garden when his made prepare a meal.

His wife ran to the garden and saw this...

The detective arrived to tom’s house

In the bag of the made Clara and
The detective found de possion

In the prison the made cry

Susan Zilberstein dijo...: Great girls!! Please change: "...his maid prepared ..." "...at Tom's house." "In the maid's bag (Clara)... the poison." "...the maid cried."; 8 de julio de 2008, 9:43
Susan Zilberstein dijo...: Please also correct: "I love sleeping...""You have a telephone..." "Oh, my God! Who killed you?" "...and when I met the maid...I had a telephone..." ""While I was talking on the phone with ...I saw a bottle of poison..." "...going to prison..." "...maid...I trusted her."; 8 de julio de 2008, 9:51